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Beautiful Desperations by ~summerglow:iconsummerglow:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


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Twirling dances creep around the shadows,
Beautiful ebony drips golden fears.
Forgotten steps repeat the sun...
Rephrase the stars...
Rewrite eternity.

Graceful bells sing sweet melodies,
Upon this manipulative dance
We all cry amongst the shadows.
Silently scraping porcelaine walls,
With vacant eyes lost upon beauty.

This is dreams in poisoned love,
Caged within black screams
Forever lost within the spirals.

The black sun's desperation
Never sheds a tear.


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©2003-2009 ~summerglow
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Author's Comments

Well, this is inspired by a friend of mine. It saddens me to see things like this, and I guess this is just a point of few of mine.

~hokum started to get angry I wasn't submitting any more work and told me today to start writing, so I did. :P

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~residesinflames Oct 1, 2003, 9:50:36 PM
wow thats really amazing i thik you style ..... i think you have just put your self on my watch ...

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-pull the trigger and the nightmare stops-
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~summerglow Oct 2, 2003, 11:03:34 AM
Wow, thanks :)

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White summer. So far I have gone to see you again...
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~purpleblobofgoo Oct 2, 2003, 3:34:24 PM
Simply amazing. :) I have no idea why, but this reminds me of the lyrics from the band Jack Off Jill.

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<3 Kristen
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~cinny Oct 2, 2003, 6:47:29 PM
Silently scraping porcelaine walls,
With vacant eyes lost upon beauty.

I like it.
People don't love sadness enough.
People don't love reality enough.

I love you enough!
WOo :hug:

yeah now that i'm done being random, i like it. :) *thumbs up* keep em comin chiquita.

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Why do we feel so terrible if terrible's in fashion?
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*dcmbrnite Oct 3, 2003, 6:26:34 AM
oOo excellent...*is in awe* your words spill perfection...

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All things Foamy
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~witheredxsoul Oct 4, 2003, 7:54:02 PM
wow... really awesome, another piece that amazes me... i love the depth to this one though... you can read it so many times and never get bored of it... it seems to have a different meaning every time i read it... nice work!

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When you hit the bottom, laugh and think of how much worse off you could be...
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*meic2 Oct 5, 2003, 4:20:51 AM
"Silently scraping porcelaine walls,
With vacant eyes lost upon beauty."

Priceless!

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Try again. Fail again. Fail better.
~ Samuel Beckett ~
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~delliversagain Oct 6, 2003, 9:43:05 PM
what can I say? the imagery is beautiful.

like autumn, I love any "sun"/"star" descriptions and yours were unique.

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"When you step on the brake, your life is in your foot's hands."
--George Carlin
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~chode-09 Oct 9, 2003, 3:44:13 PM
Everyone has said what I would have said so, nice work.
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