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My Desire by ~summerglow:iconsummerglow:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open




Serenade the stars with sweet confessions,
The golden moon leaves vast impressions.

Bleeding clouds misted with melodic grace,
Seductive winds who's furious pace

I race.

Run through the night to escape the perfect dawning,
Upon city tops singing, It's you I'm longing.

With your hands I painted this brilliant sky on fire,
Fill me with passion, surely inspire

My one desire.
©2003-2009 ~summerglow
:iconsummerglow:

Author's Comments

This is about anything I love, I decided to resubmit this due to random happenings. But, I fixed some things, and now it's good.

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~chii-5 Sep 6, 2003, 2:00:52 PM
Awsome, I love the texture and colours
Keep it up!! :)
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~darksiren69 Sep 6, 2003, 2:37:50 PM
thatz an awesome image.

"With your hands I painted this brilliant sky on fire,
Fill me with passion, surely inspire"

i like that part.
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*meic2 Sep 6, 2003, 4:16:17 PM
So refreshing to read a celebratory joyous piece. This gave me a lift!

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Try again. Fail again. Fail better.
~ Samuel Beckett ~
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~purpleblobofgoo Sep 6, 2003, 7:16:07 PM
This is really beautiful. I don't think I read this before.. or maybe I did. Either way, it's lovely. :) Great job.

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<3 Kristen
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*dcmbrnite Sep 7, 2003, 5:35:20 PM
wonderful :aww: the screenshot is just fantastic and your poem is written wonderfully

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All things Foamy
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~summerglow Sep 7, 2003, 5:44:24 PM
Thanks so much :) :hug:

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"All matter is merely energy condensed to a slow vibration, we are all one consciousness experiencing itself subjectively, there's no such thing as death, life is only a dream and we are the imagination of ourselves."
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~cinny Sep 8, 2003, 10:34:23 AM
Wow! I think this is my favorite poem by you man. I like this alot.
Keep it short and sweet.
You rhymed it really well too. ^.^ Oooo just the right amount of emotion.
+fav

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Why do we feel so terrible if terrible's in fashion?
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~Liteless Sep 14, 2003, 6:32:48 PM
This is an amazing poem. The imagery is perfect and the words bring out color and emotion. The rythem and format are so nicely done. I can't wait to read more :)

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Viva La Revolution!!
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